Prologue Page 1

 

July 20th, 2009, 12:50 am





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HELLO! Hello, everyone! Welcome to optical Disarray, I hope you enjoy reading!
I'm here to drop a line that the pages for chapters 1-3 will be a bit blurry, thanks to re-sizing I had to do for volume one. I'm re-uploading the pages because the dialogue for the book version was slightly altered from the original smackjeeves version.
The new dialogue should make the story easier to follow!

Original Post: That's a river he's looking into, by the way. With...what are those, flood lights? ;>>
AlexYoshida, July 20th, 2009, 12:53 am Reply

Advertisement, August 17th, 2017, 2:48 am Reply

[Image description for screen readers]

Eliot: I can't take it anymore...!

[A young man (Eliot) is crying and appears to be soaking wet. He leans over the railing of a bridge, tears falling.]

Eliot: I have to make it stop...

[Eliot looks out over a river. It appears to be part of a canal system, with floodlights on either side of the water. There is no visible bottom to the water.]
AlexYoshida, October 15th, 2015, 1:50 am Reply